Pungent lies
Congregate all around you
Truth hides its face
Your words are meaningless
Evaporating from your snake-like tongue
Please don't try to cover up
It's useless
Author notes
Prompt: Sugar-coated
27 words
In a list
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they're a libra
lol I liked this !
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Awesome
I've fallen victim to a few "snake-like tongue"before. Awesome poem and great take on the prompt. People sugar coat things so much that I have gotten cavity's. lol
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Ooh, love the big words.
Pungent lies
Congregate all around you
Nice description! -
ahh, well stated!!
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