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Blood drawn hearts
Two lives have fallen apart
Nothing to hold
Hearts turned cold

A razor drug across two
The blood stained shoe
Suicide notes left everywhere
Life was never fair

What's left but memories
Only a soft whisper in the trees
Tells a story of two
What was once of me and you

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  • Heroesrox
    August 29

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    This is so sad, but I loved it. You rhymed so effortlessly and that is wonderful. Awesome work. Hope to read more of yours soon. best wishes. Keep penning!


  • Princess Kitten-
    August 25
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    Awwah... T_T

    Beautifully written, yet sad..