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Slow golden graze

Former molten traces
linger
golden haze delivers slow
in languor

Yesterday sun shapes
shadow
inhale slicey sliver
blossom

Above the field
scent
Makes hay from flowered
pasture

Dusky songsters huddle
stretching
dewy fingers tracing
notes unreached

Smiles etched in darkness
creep
hearts of vivid season
visitors

Cover all with easy glow
so dull
corners rounded by rays
burnished

Soft landings on long days
short nights
hidden colors, silken fires
summer replies

Author notes

Haven't flexed the pen for awhile
Summer is so golden this year

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  • Just4u
    August 25

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    Love these lines...awesome

    Dusky songsters huddle
    stretching
    dewy fingers tracing
    notes unreached

    Hugs...Eddy