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Maimed

I will never surrender...to you
I will never forget you.
And though my heart longs to see you once more.
I can never forgive you...for all the things you've done.

You took my heart
You maimed my soul
You vanquished my salvation in life.
What can I do
To prove to you
That I am real and we can coexist here.

(I will never surrender.
I can never forgive you)

Realize your love
Is nothing more than writings on the wall
Your love, my life
Give me no freedom to remain.
Death strives, I die
To sacrifice myself
To you
For you
My soul belongs to you.


You brought me
To breathe
Then my eternity would cease
In your eyes
I die
Foreverlasting death

Save me, bring me
From damnation well abroad

In my eyes
You've died
So many years ago.

(I can never forgive you...)
(I can never forget you...)
(You've shattered me apart)

Carry me from eternity
Bring me to salvation
I loved you for a time
(Until you shattered me)
My love
To you
(Is nothing but a lie)
I can't forget
Everything you've done to me.

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  • The-punk-princess
    September 3

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    This sent shivers down my spine (and that is a good thing!)
    This is really powerful, I could feel the hate and the pain.
    I really enjoyed reading this!!


  • Melee Vau gold member
    September 3

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    wow!

    this poem shows how close love and hate are - I think you cannot hate a person who you didn't once love (maybe??). beautifully written, liked the bracket device.