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Standpoint of Stagnation

A clear glass bottle
full of liquid life,

or so I've always thought.

In reverie I see dreams
yet to be fulfilled,

Quickly life passes me by.

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27 Words. Prompt :: stagnant

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  • Sheilasbabygal4life
    October 7

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    This was very well written! I really enjoyed reading this... I liked the way this was short and how it flowed freely. It was interesting too read this. Keep up the good work.


  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    August 25

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    A clear glass bottle
    full of liquid life,

    I love those lines!

    Great job with the prompt and good luck!