hair like tangible sunlight
spills over shoulders so fare
and frames a face so fine you see
traces of divinity there
and eyes that change like seasons
hold sway over all they seek
her skin pallid as a bust of pallas
upon which a raven may perch and speak
Author notes
to the Goddess.
A contest entry
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It is really a good poem. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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Beautiful piece here. I'm not really sure I understood what you were saying in the title though, and would appreciate if you took the time to explain. Thanks!!
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of course. i just didn't know what to call it so i named it Title of the Poem. nothing to deep or meaningful.
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You really need to get published. Or signed or both.
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Yay, its beautiful, the write is so dreamy, and thank you does sound kinda lame, hey... This is beyond words...
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