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Waves coming into shore in monotonous waves
It’s boring – there’s no variation –
Neither in the size or their wildness –
It’s just small poundings – boring.

I miss excitement in my life – variation
Not just the waves on the beach –
But also in my personal life
I find it boring and I need a change.

I need a change – so what should it be?
I would change my love-life
It’s boring and there’s no variation – single
I want to find the love of my live – but where?

I would change the way I life – mysterious
I’m like an open book and people know me – all too well
I’m tired of being recognized at the street – I want to be anonymous
Still that would be hard because then I can’t fight against – the new world order.

I found a thing that I love here – to wake people up from their sleep
Not in their beds but see where they are heading and make them see
That this is not a pillow – we actually need to stand up in order to survive
If we don’t stand up – we will be cheated and live the rest of our life’s – as slaves

I would defiantly like to change my success here in life
I aren’t the person with the most success – ha what would you say
I had two blood-clots in the brain already when I was at the age of seventeen
I guess I haven’t been the front-driver of my life – that’s going to change NOW!

what would you change in your life?

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  • xXMe17xX
    September 5

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    i think this poem is very personal.i like the way you state how badly you want a change. I feel the way you write, is very poetic..hard to understand sometimes..but thats why its so poetic. x

  • Hm, good poem but it would sound more poetic if you didn't state, "the third change" or the numbers, let it flow for itself.