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Immortal

i am tortured by
the photo placed before me
this beautiful foreign vista
that i shall never truly see

i am tortured by
beauty unencumbered
by flaws or age or fear
of days of dwindling number

for such beauty is immortal
and timeless on it's own
but beauty and depth together
brings light the likes the sun has never shown

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  • bunnyslasher157
    November 11
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    Love. I loved this... wow.... Good job on this... You're invited to the next round. Good luck and keep writing!!

  • I'll go with the first option... Definately loved this...

    'i am tortured by
    the photo placed before me'

    So true...

    Its really Beautiful...

  • Seriously, how do you do this? It really does seem so effortless. I envy that. Well done. You're amazing.