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Operation: Abortion Abortion!

Last night I had a dream,
God had called a meeting with me.
He wanted me to join His team
and report His message to humanity.

I thought it was the coolest thing.
So, of course, I accepted.
Here is what was said,
as best as I could interpret it.

He informed me of His mission,
and the way things operate.
He told me He’s gotten backed up
just as far as He will tolerate.

He told me what we call ‘miscarriages’ or ‘infant fatality’
were souls being called back,
due to rules that have been broken
and He can have none of that.

However, ever since abortions came along
He’s been working overtime.
He’s becoming increasingly frustrated
and He wants me to speak His mind.

Three of His best souls
have been returned three times.
Commencing Operation: Abortion Abortion,
so that all of His souls may shine.

Take these words to heart,
For we have been given a task.
Offer adoption as an alternative
to get His cycle on track.

Author notes

This is a poem that I wrote because I couldn't get the words out of my head, and after I wrote it, I did have a dream about it. I hope you all enjoy this poem, and forward it to your friends. Please comment constructively!

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  • Coldwater
    September 12
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    Super write, I've read some good poetry of late, all very original, and this is another. More good work here.
    Regards.


  • tombruize
    August 30

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    Nice write...

    I don't know about the message, though. I'm not for or against abortion, but I am for not taking peoples rights away. Because when you take one away... others will follow. But anyway, good write!!

  • wow

    this is a really good poem!! and it does have the right message!! abortion is wrong and you did a wonderful job relating the message!!!


  • pranj
    August 25
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    .................

    sis...
    again I tell you, your words are alive...
    a very well written piece, great job...
    a great write...keep writing....
    love,
    -pranj