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Sweet Letters

Dear Cheyenne,
Sweet love of mine,
I cast to you
this ardent hand
offered in sweet surrender;

grasping to waves of hope,
fighting this illogical sunder
of a mind normally whole-
your beauty affects me thus.

The grace of the fair doe
naught when compared
to flowing strands of auburn-
with longing do I gaze upon you.

I know naught what could be compared
to the beauty of your eyes;
sparkling as diamonds
captured within the night sky.

Sweet lovely lady,
allow me to bask in your presence
if only for one more day
hour or minute-
please say one thing,
forever you shall be
enchantment encased
for these blind eyes.

With everlasting love,
your admirer am I

Author notes

K a r o n

XD Yes, it sounds creepy, no it's not really ment to be creepy, it just kind of ended up that way.
You'd said write a letter, so I wrote one in poem form - as a random admirer to a young lady I've never met. I hope you like it, I hope it isn't seen as too audacious on my part, and I wish you the best of luck with your contest.

A contest entry

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