Sometimes when the night is dark
The light no longer shines in heart
Its time to go, my dearest friend
Time my love, comes to an end
They come to carry me home
Say I can't live no more life
They come to take me away
No more me, no more alive
Sometimes when the moon is full
I remember the way you saw me
Your words were like soft rain my friend
But all things must come to an end
They come to drag me away
Take me to somewhere called home
Say I can't live here another day
Come quietly, yes come
Sometimes when I remember you
I laugh and cry and wonder
If you ever cared for me at all
And what spell we were under
So I take a step in the great unknown
My journey one step closer to home
I know you don't love me anymore
Tell me now what was it for
Sometimes I close my eyes and die
Wishing I was lying in your arms
But now its time, my dearest friend
All things come to a natural ....
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It is a sad fact, all things come to an end. And most of the time we don't even know why. Well written, now I'm depressed and want to cut my wrists and come to an unnatural ....
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J/K Well written, I enjoyed it... Scott 
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I found this a bit depressing! The only thing which cheered me up was that you knew to use "lying in your arms" instead of "laying". God, how that misuse of English makes me boil. Better to be depressed than angry.
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