fading buzz
under the Raid cloud-
a dead fly
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yesterday evening
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sometimes it is necessary to rock their little world, and
a fly formerly known as Buzz sings purple raid...
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LOL good one!!!
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This poem is so simple, and yet says something so incredibly deep and sad to the reader. "a dead fly" is pure magic, although it seems like a very simple phrase. I applaud you for your simplicity, because more often than we would like to admit, the wicked poet within us wants to complicate every good word with a longer one. Sometimes the very basic phrases are the most beautiful melody's.
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How evil can one get. I mean, I never write about such horrifying things, never! Murder is not a solution! Buy proper screening madam. Have you no decency?
I am appalled. No, aghast.
Cute. I'd have hung it.
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Like Bill did?
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Don't go there madam, it's perverse. I am too delicate to know such things!
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