Yeah,
It’s me again,
Living,
Not really,
I don’t really live,
I kind of am dieing away,
Slowly, No one notices though,
It’s like they don’t care,
They say they do though,
Depressing,
Wish I could end it all,
If I were it on the world,
I would let nature have it all,
No people to ruin anything,
No people to hurt each other,
Like me,
The girl who lives,
But doesn’t really live,
That’s life I guess,
Whatever,
I don’t care,
Not anymore.
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Comments
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Very well done, a good look into a soul that is hurting and is yearning for the love and respect of others around them. So eqasily felt is the fealing of not even being noticed. Nicely written.


