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Come Listen

Despite the fact you never really satisfy any of my needs
When I'm in my clingy moods, you really push me away,
sending synapses misfiring as I envision smacking the shit out of you.
You can't see your faults when they are staring at you
through blind eyes you disappoint more than please
We are old faded jeans that fit snug
but manage a wedgie once in a while in the worst way
You stick in places that I never knew exsisted in my head
fiddling with thoughts you should have never seen,
Only rarely do I get to touch your senses
and send you over the moon and in to my dreams.
We sleep together but lay awake in differnt time zones
falling hasn't felt this good since our first love
I know you can hear these words as the spray lips in venom,
Come listen to whispers as they fight into screams
and fade into an ending.

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