Kill me quickly,
Before I change my mind.
I'm feeling sickly,
Way before my time.
I don't know how it went so wrong,
The tears burn my eyes.
Why didn't I see all along,
The wickedness and lies.
I've lost my will to fight,
Can't you see that?
I've forgot how it feels to be held tight,
Don't you know that?
Why do I try to get up,
When I always fall down.
Why am I such a screw up,
Why can't I smile instead of frown?
Author notes
Before anyone gets on me about being "suicidal"
Know right here and now that I'm not.
I write what I feel when the urge hits me.
So if at the point in tie when I wrote this,
My thoughts were a bit... "dark"
Oh well.
Life goes on!
You clicked... you read... you thought?
Comments
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wow girl,
Very nicely written...dark and beautiful -
I have been reading some things you have written, and I really like them, and can relate.
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A crisp and very finely done poem here, with some fine rhyme and meter...and "offically" very dark.. I loved it a ton!!!
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i love this one! you are an awsome writer
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TWIN, YOU ARE NEVER A SCREW UP... *HOLDS YOU TIGHTLY* YOU MIGHT HAVE MADE SOME MISTAKES IN YOUR LIFE BUT WE LEARN FROM THEM , MAKING MISTAKES ALWAYS MAKES US STRONGER! U CAN ALWAYS TALK TO ME! I LUVERS U!
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Wow speachless
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twinny ur not a screw up and i dont want u to die! keep ur head high sweetie im here for u...this is a rly deep poem!
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Deep thoughts...hoep that is all they are and their expression was meant for paper only!
Hope all is well with you ? Good writing though...
~Sie
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Wow babe deep stuff your no screw up at all I wish you lived closer to me life would be better so you keep going xxx love Matt
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noones a screwup.i think your tight , its a real good poem.
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