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Proud Yet?

Are you proud yet?
Will you ever be?
Could you ever be,
proud of me?

All I have ever done,
will it never be enough?
what will it take to make you proud of me?

I have done so much.
Yet you see so little.
does it mean anything to you?
Cuz i try so hard
to make you proud
but maybe i should give up
since i can't please you.
maybe me being me will finally make you proud.

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  • Grey.Area.
    October 22

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    Good write. I can feel your emotions and it seems like a poetic train of thought.

    Well done.

    I have done so much.
    Yet you see so little.
    does it mean anything to you?

    I often ask this myself and feel this way.

    Good Job.