Embrace this agony
it'll be the most amazing thing you've ever felt
Your comatose heart will
thud again, pumping the
venom through your veins
And I promise to kiss
the pain away, after you're
done detoxing
You'll come out of this far more beautiful
than the stars ever dared to be
Author notes
Not one of my best works.
But I had a lot of stuff on my mind, and this was my only way to get it out.
What was your favorite part? Your least favorite part?
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i liked this poem! it lacks the excitement that i love about some of your other works, but still a good write. the last two lines are the best part i think =) one thing i think this piece is missing is that brutal emotional power that your other poems carry in every line.
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Like I said in the AN, it was a ramble.
My other works are more thought out.
Lmao.
Thank you so very much for the comment.
It's always appreciated.
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haha we all need a ramble once in a while
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oh my?
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Lmao, "oh my" indeed.
Thankies for the comment and the applause, lovie.
<3 <3 <3 <3
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