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Just Leave

Lies told, bonds broke
Friendships gone away
Never to return, never seen again
Tears fall from my face

The hurt, the pain
I do feel strongly again
The injury you committed
Hit my anterior cardinal vein

How could you hurt me again?
Do you plan it all out?
Was it a joke, a big hoax
What was it all about?

Your nothing to me
Nothing to the earth
To me you dead and buried
Beyond the rocks and dirt

Please leave me
Let me live
In a world
Where no one
Loves

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