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Happy Birthday Son

You can't imagine the happiness
You brought in my life
That first day I see you

To receive you the day before my birthday
Is such a blessing and gift of love
We always celebrate together

You have grown into an adult now
How I miss your small days
when you use to yes mommy...
I love you mommy....
You use to hug mommy

But my 18 year son
Welcome to a being a man
Of morals, honor and dignity
The respect, honesty, and love
You uphold with your head high

Keep strong in your beliefs
And prosper with god blessings
In the adventure of life's journey
and all your future endevors

I am so thankful for you son
I have beautiful memories of your chilhood
You're one smart cute red hair boy with talent
I enjoy your art and dancing and so much more

Not forgetting how you would make
a perfect pose for a picture
I love you dear special son Michael
I forever hold you with love in my heart
          Happy Birthday

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  • penman gold member
    November 18
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    Beautiful

    What a wonderful write for you son. So very loving and well expressed. Thank you for sharing