She is one of the beauties of nature
A woman in her prime
Her spirit is in tune with the earth
Her heart beats a rhythm of rhyme
The sun swims throughout her hair
Reflecting the joy on her face
The depths of her gaze hold you
Gently, yet firmly in place
The strength of all her wisdom
Flows through her
Her presence burns with grace
She shows it with quiet wonder
In her walk,hands, and face
She is Mother Nature
To know and dismiss her a crime
Her love of life is endless
For she has withstood this test
called "Time"
Author notes
Pic courtesy of www.deviantart.com -by Umina
A contest entry
- Wildlife/Nature/or Weather by misticmoonlite.
625 points, ended September 1, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the ending to dismiss her is a crime. I hate seeing when people throw out litter around our parks and streams. I like how you time in a grand scheme of love. Mother Nature may get even from our self center use of her lands, air, more liter thrown without care. I was watching how global warming is affection our would. At the end it said we should care about ourselves not the earth. The earth will stand the test of time. This heart warming and brings out a softness to it theme. Very well done.
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Should be a gold trpohy indeed
This is excellent indeed .In the moments if one takes the time you so can hear her breath and moan how she wrps herself around you and give butterfly kisses every day how could you not protect her and keep her embraced with love
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ah yes
a woman of great power indeed, loved the write congrats on the green shiny thingy
hugs Draig
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excellent!
You show us the beauty of nature so creatively in this poem. I enjoy all of the imagery and feelings of peace, and the rhyming is excellent!
Good luck in this contest!!
Jeannette
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How utterly beautiful and true! The image is beautiful too. It reminds me of an Indian river called the "Ganga" (or Ganges) which flows down the foothills of the Himalayas.
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this is a lovely read with a great flow and words illustrating the story told well. nice work.
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oh this is pretty and so well penned in words,Nature in her eyes is always nice to picture...thank you for this entry
good luck
Linda
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Aww, this is really beautiful sis. Your write is perfect for the picture. Mother Nature at her finest. Great job...Best wishes in the contest.
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What a beautiful poem you have created sis! Plus this picture is simply wonderful! You have a beautiful way of rhyming, this reads so smooth. Good luck in the contest.
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A beauiful look at Mother nature. Your words flow and makes for a smooth read. The visions you portray are beautiful aswell.
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Precious~
Ooooooooooooooh My Sis this is a Beauty
and Love how You painted Images to compliment
the physical Image~ Just Lovely!!
I Adore the line:
The sun swims throughout her hair
Grabs and does not want to let go
Woot~ 
Yay~~~~
Love this~~~
Hope You are feeling well
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in the contest
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Words to foster respect for nature
are always a blessing, and yours
are a particularly beautiful blessing!
M-C
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This is beautiful and a joy to recite aloud. You did a wonderful job with the picture prompt and I think that's what Mother nature looks like too.
Love,
Amera
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Excellent
What a beautiful write. And so well done. Many blessings in the contest.
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a good piece of poetry, ah mother nature and father time, they swing in circles around each other, one throwing fresh beauty into the world whilst the other takes it to decay.
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