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Maybe

I just can't take life anymore
I try to repress all these feelings
But it was all in vain
I started to think....
Maybe there was a reason my dad didn't want me
Maybe I started to cut myself because I wasn't worth it
Maybe I am worthless
Maybe I don't deserve to be happy
Maybe my parents should always be disappointed in me
Maybe, just maybe
All these things are coming down and suffocating me
High schools a drag
Everyone pretending to be something they're not
I hate that....
I have a mask of course
But I'm me at the same time
I'm just afraid
Afraid to trust because...
What if I get hurt?
But I try to breathe
And pull myself through one more day
Don't know why i'm still here
But I am
And hopefully i'll make it

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  • lindaburns gold member
    September 28

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    I like the way you took care to see that you spelled correctly. I don’t like lower case “i”s but I know that’s one style of writing. Your flow isn’t the best I’ve seen but I recognize that you broke in logical places whether it flowed or not. I do that myself. I like the way the person talking can talk about all the negative things in life and still be hopeful. I bet she makes it. Good work.