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She is mom

Your world is spinning into oblivion
And the only answer is her
She cares
She loves
She is mom

How could you lose something that was so precious
so fragile
and how could you gain it?

When you cry she comforts you
She is the one that tells you
everything's going to be alright

You've never felt like this before
You've never felt such compassion

What is a mom
How are they supposed to act
Are they supposed to scream and shout
when your already falling apart
or are they supposed to be more like a friend

I have a mom
She is kind
She is love
She is real

She is mom

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