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A heart that will never be woken.

I was stupid and young.
But I’ve finally figured out that you were just full of lies.
You said you would always be there.
How come I couldn’t see them through your shiny blue eyes?
But now my heart won’t beat again.
You dropped it, and left it crushed and cold.
I would just like to say that I love you.
I would give anything for us to be together till we are old.
But that will never be because now we are through.
You left my heart fractured and broken.
I will never be able to trust another,
for my heart will never be woken.

I wrote this about six months ago. I've had it on my computer for a while, but have only just decided to put it up. Comment? x x

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