My crazy neighbor, Mr. Trouble
told me something wild
"If you whistle when blowing a bubble
Then it'll have a new style.
It'll play the song you hummed
until has to pop...I said
"Mr. Trouble, thats dumb
you really need to stop"
Going home,I picked up my bubbles
Then I set it back down.
Did I just listen to Mr. Trouble?
Than I made a frown.
"Im very curious,very indeed
what'll happen if I try
It's not like if I blow these
I will suddenly die.
I glanced at the can
and opened the lid
Took out the stick and
Guess what he did
I whistled away than exploded my head!
The End!
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Please comment. 
lol
I'm 11 years old. Enjoy
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i liked your poem
this is very cute and funny! i enjoyed this longlife.
you done a terrific jobs and i liked your rhymes! keep up the good work! -Slick 
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Very funny and imaginative. The rhyme was swift and silly and wonderfully fun to keep up with!!!
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