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Zodiac - Aquarius 24th August

Daily Couples:

One of you wants to go deep and discuss feelings, but the other prefers a more rational approach when it comes to discussing matters. You need to find some common ground, or the going could get rough.




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I begged him to listen to my whispers in the rain and to just hold me, because in a couple of weeks time we wont have the chance to do this for awhile, but you just shrug your head.

I don't know how you can turn emotions off like a tap, but I know that I can't do this for you. My heart is racing, fantasising about marriage and beauty and other things that could be the two of us if you would only open your eyes [I know that your blind, but you don't need sight to realise].

I think I fel in love with the sound of your voice today, more than I did yesterday, Thursday, last year and way back when I didn't even know your name.

It's funny how we are so far away from eachother, how we can be so different and yet we fit together in such a way that nobody could deny the stars move when they see us coming. I know that somehow, we'll find a way to cope - you miss my lips as much as I miss yours.

I'm just afraid and I know it's only natural when you're in love.

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  • Beautiful Sin-
    August 26

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    This is a beautiful piece. I fell in love with every word. It's like you wrote down a few of my feelings.


  • August Starlight silver member
    August 24

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    beautiful.
    i can relate, in a strange way, even though the situation you've described isn't all that different.
    i ADORE the third stanza.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    August 24

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    This is beautiful. I loved every word, and I also like how well it related to the horoscope. It was so originally written and you really penned the deep emotions that were shifting through your piece. I especially loved:

    -I don't know how you can turn emotions off like a tap, but I know that I can't do this for you.
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    I'm not esxactly sure why, but I love how you phrased that and made it so relatable. thank you for entering, dear. I can't wait to read more from youuu<3