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Acllaumpaer


far from sun being remote from darkness

through the the light in one world
niohoggr awoke for one last time
to bare in death threw life's sword
to sit in the halls of eyes of  serpentine kings
there he sought refuge in the nothing-less of time
and him who's soul searches for life
will bring those undying back from the dead

the watchers are fallen angels
who wage war with sorcery against demons

who use there power through the signs in mirrors
to confuse the human form in lowly beings
only to control there fate and their destinies will be combined in time
to wage war against the niohoggr
the enemies of the fallen angels
who are at war with niohoggr dragon warriors
who are lords from times gone bye
when they where there living

their souls where taken from them

by the watchers
who betrayed these lords by seducing there mortal flesh
and by doing so they removed there capacity to wage war
there desires was there downfall
there loving of the flesh consumed there hearts
and therefore they gave way and lost there souls
the watchers were abandoned by there god
and this was how niohoggr was vanquished by the fallen angels

the dragons warriors and niohoggr
have great power in death
but they have greater power in life
if only they could kill every watcher but one
they could win back there powers
and take hold their human form
but the watchers are smart and devious
they have human beings in there control
and niohoggr can not take any other form
but that of his living soul
he must kill those fallen-angels
until he finds that one watcher who will heal his soul
the warriors are niohoggrs battle troops of the undead
and they need there king niohoggr
to wage war and defeat the watchers

so they can take there place in Valhalla

NOW that the time has come
and the great millennium has brought around a new battle
between the  watchers and the dragon lords
all is set for one last final battle
niohoggr is the sword of death
the sword brought back to life
to save the souls of his undead warriors
the eagle is niohoggr eyes into the living world
if the watchers kill the eagle that bares niohoggr seal
than niohoggr will be lost for all time
and he will join his men in the halls of the undead forever

the watchers came down from heaven
and were they melted with Human flesh
and made children of their own with humans
there curse is there sadistic charms to beguile all forms
they are the evil angels on earth
they were the cause for the great flood
that flood that caused niohoggr's army
to be utterly defeated from this world
niohoggr was spared by the watchers
but not before he saw his warriors destroyed
the watchers took him and imprisoned him

on the far side of the world
never to live as a king, only to be a slave to there will
never knowing his rightful place in this world
only to be enslaved by there enemy from within

the watchers live in the valley of the earth
there place is where they kingdom stands unconquered
no human form can go there in light or in darkness
niohoggr must face them in the land of far reaches
where watchers and dragon lords go to roam the world

of the living and the world of the dying
niohoggr and his warriors must kill all the watchers

but one is outside there reach of powers
so they can stand a chance against the king slayer

and her guards of fallen angels
only then will he free the souls of his men
only then can his warrior lords join him in battle once more

the watchers are after the fire-ship of niohoggr
they need the dragon fore ship

because it holds the arch of life on earth and in heaven
niohoggr does not know where this ship is nor does any dragon warrior
no one but the first king of dragon warriors knows where it is
the dragon firs ship is stuff of legend
the watchers need this fire ship
so they can ascend back to heaven
and earn back gods grace in next world

the dragons lords and warriors are not living

nor are are they dead, they are the undead






































Author notes

Acllaumpaer- is a norman word meaning -to die together

my short story that i am going to finish.this is just a taster.

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  • Ken-Maverick
    September 14

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    It'll be interesting what the full story will be like.
    Well done and all the best in the contest.

    Ken


  • Hikari Lady
    September 12

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    Judged

    This was a very intresting story, long rather but I enjoyed it. You had some vivid details running around and your imagery was lovely so I wished to know the ending.
    I liked this even though it wasn't a love story between the two creatures, it was well written and thought through. Some lines didn't flow very well and some lacked strength but I guess that was to be expected from such long and detailed write. Thanks for entring this contest and good luck.

    Love
    ~Noor


  • twelfthknight silver member
    August 25

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    wow very good! a great epic story, it reads like a norse legend. Very well written, best of luck in the contest I'm sure you will do well

    • Deaths Prayer
      August 25
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      hi

      Thank you friend for you're kind words

      I am going to make it into a short story when i get the time got so much more to ass to it. this was just a little teaser

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