Keep me safe and warm
Hold me in your arms
Chase away all my fears
Give me the strength I need
Complete me
I need you to say
I love you,
I need you,
And I'll never let you go.
You are my everything
You I can not lose
With out you in my life I may
Just die of pain
With out you in my life
I may just run away
Hold me in your arms
For my soul is so cold
Hold me in your arms
For I feel so cold
Author notes
"hug me
because I feel so cold"
A contest entry
- Prompt 87 by crivanea.
700 points, ended September 3, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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short and sad...with painful words and heartfelt memories..lines that went where I expected with the prompt..nicely written
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Liked the last stanza, a fine piece of poetry indeed. Well penned and good luck in the contest.
Love
~Noor -
really good.
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