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Failure

You walk up to me,
And tell me a tale,
So I listen in wonder,
How fast will you fail?

You say I'm fat,
I say "Whatever."
You say I'm useless,
I say, a "Treasure."

You say I'm wierd,
I say "You'd know."
You say I'm stupid,
I say, "Go blow."

You say I'm ugly,
I say, "I'm me."
You say I'm creepy,
I say, "Whoopee."

You say I'm nerdy,
I say, "I'm cool."
You say you're better,
I say, "A tool."

You walk away,
I start to laugh.
I cannot believe,
You're brain's but a half.

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  • this is really cute! "i say you blow" xD my favourite line!


  • ivoire gold member
    August 24

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    Delightful

    A wonderful poem. Your writing is delightful and your message very wise for your years. Like the word selection, rhythm and flow. Well done!!

    ivoire