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dream 001

it started with visions of a snowy hills and rocks... with a soft music playing in the back ground..

it finlay focuses on a group of men, with one man sitting on tree trunk wearing a long fur coat  handing out ice creams to to the other 3 men.
while the men were eating there ice cream, one of the ( which i then take his perception ) relises that the "chocolate" on the ice cream was actualy made from blood. I walk towards a river to empty my bowl of the remaining substance.

the next thing is that im running from the man in the fur coat, trying to find the other 2 keys and making sure my key is still around my neck.
i stumble over rocks and land near one of the keys, it is covered in blood and is hanging from a low branch on a shrub.  i grab the key and quickly find my feet..
running i try to find a safe place to hide one the keys because he if finds and kills me he will have 2 out of 3 keys, and i can not allow that to happen.
i climb a tree thinking that i should hang the key from the highest branch. suddenly a hand clasps my foot and pulls my shoe off. i jump to the next tree, and fall a foot short and hit the ground, breaking an arm...
i keep running scared for my life, i keep thinking if the others are alive. and where are thier keys..  i have 2 out 3 keys..  but that makes me the biggest target at this moment.
i hear some thing behind me so turn to look around and i trip over...
i fall into a puddle... i look around and realise that i was in a puddle of blood and body parts are scattered around me.. 


thats all i can remember.

Author notes

this dream occured a few weeks ago. it makes no sence to me at all.
but it is one of my weridest, scarest dreams.

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  • lolagirl
    August 25

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    wow that is certainly scary. Luckily it was not real!!! Thats the good thing about nightmares I guess, the only good thing. Glad you found your way out. Nicely written