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last thoughts

there's no more words
i've spent each one
the fighting has to end

my tears they fall
continue to spill
to fill this emptiness

this ache within
will one day heal
re-mend and i'll move on
i'll be okay
i know i will
isn't that what people say

forget the pain
pretend and lie
what ever it should take

make amends
forgive, forget
erase that it existed

fight for me
don't let me go
each word a silent plead
as once more we face the awful truth
its time for our goodbyes


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  • sleepinglion
    August 24

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    A lovely poem,
    As we are supposed to give constructive comments
    I would have said, - ''that is what people say
    and, -
    ''each word a silent plea''
    But of course it's down to personnal taste in the end, and some things are lost in translation across the oceans, Best of luck
    david