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wrong

you give me words of love
and pretty things
and take my hand within your palm
gentle kiss's there you place
like fleeting butterflies

i hear each word
the yells and screams
the hits and put me downs
remembering a time of once
not to long ago it seems

you pull me close
we dances and float
on a cloud just made for two
whispered words and fingers laced
our hearts mear into one

another promise
once more you break
i should be used by now
to all the lies and hateful things
to me not being right

each step beside you
i take with care
you've forgotten that i'm there
or maybe that's just a wish i want
to one day just disappear

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 6
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    this poem was deep..
    hit the old heart strings
    thank you and good luck

    Passions