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Overdose

You've had enough
Its gone too far
You want to carry on
But you know you can't

Your shouting and screaming
Wailing about
But you've had your say
It's out your stout

Your scars aren't healing
And then there's a 'but'
But the scars are still there
Your all broken up and cut

I'm infected by the sound
That your letting out
You need to let go
You need to get out

Run, run
Far away
Far away
To a place you can stay . . .


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  • Monique.x
    August 24
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    i tried my hardest >.<

    Plzz put nice comments coz i tried my very best