All my friends
Please be light
Because now we are going to
Follow the right
The place in which we live
Is in danger
But together we can show
There is no danger
We all will have hope
And give hope to others
For I shall say
We will never be in danger
if only we work together
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It reminds me greatly of the quote "Stronger together than seperate." This poem conveys your will to be strong in a bad time, and your will to fight against the bad time. It had a nice feel to it when read it outloud.
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Very Good
So true, if we all lived by those words this country would be so much closer to yours. Keep writing and expressing your ideas. I like earning about your country as you see it.
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thanks...actually my country is in so much danger....
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Hey! That's a great poem! Brilliant Job!
-Crystal
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Fantastic job! Great expression here. Keep up your hard work
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thanks rameen
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good theme. Good use of expressions. Great work!
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