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Un-ready

and yet
it seems
that as I lean to
drink
you'd like to push me in
and you do
not shared
not remotely together
seperated
by the bliss that you
wouldn't
like to share with me

Author notes

this is kind of.... a response to "Ready." Or like an update to what actually happened as opposed to what I wished would happen.

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    November 17
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    A personal piece you have shared with your readers. If you ever need to talk hun, just let me know.

  • This is very well penned my dear sister!!! You did a truly wonderful job with this piece!!! I like the flow and the words that you used it has been so long since we have talked I hope that u are well I miss and love u!!!!