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I take this peice of you, I'll carry it to my grave

It's almost one a.m on a Sunday morning,
  I cant sleep on nights like these.
    All I can do is think of you.

I lay here dissecting memories,
  struggling to remember every moment I spent with you on that day all that time ago.
    I ask myself, "has it really been five months..?"

I remember walking through the park that day,
  the awkward silence between us was almost to much to bare.
    Until that simple kiss showed me I wasn't the only one with thoughts of "us" still on their mind.

Trying to remember the feeling of my body held firmly against yours, our hips pressed perfectly against one another,
  your fingers tangled in my hair and your breath warm and heavy on my collar bone,
      as my heart pounded against my ribcage harder with every beat.

These memory's are hazy,
  but I remember how I felt when I was with you,
    & not one night since then have I felt at home.

I want to relive that night,
  I want to feel again; I just want to feel alive.
    My hearts only still beating with hopes of you.

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  • individuality gold member
    August 25

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    a good piece of poetry which rips the mind to shreds with dark intent and sighs that flutter as silence strangles love, but there is a light, a ray of hope that lingers inside the heart's rhythmic somersaults.


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    August 24

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    This is very beautifully written emotions in this! It kinda makes me think about a lost love I had, so long ago!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you have lots of fun on this site!


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