My soul, it is not truly part of my body.
My soul, It is a person.
She is my soul.
My soul, my heart, my undying love.
She is all of that.
My love, it is embodied in her.
My love, it is eternally etched in the form of her name.
She is my everything.
My love, is my wolfess.
She is my salvation.
My soul, Is hurt.
My soul, Is torn and bleeding inside.
And I can't help her.
My soul, is numb.
And I can't do anything.
My love, causes me to hurt too.
My love, causes me to obey her.
Even if she tells me not to attack the one that caused it.
My love, keeps me from dying.
Even if it kills me inside to be inept and useless.
... i'll finish it if i can.... no guarantees.
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wow it made me cry
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This is just so so emotive...Im kinda speechless
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Inspiring Write.
This was a stunning piece of work. I loved it. Made me cry.
I think what's worse than being able to see it in this portryal..in this imagery..and even worse than not being able to help you and seeing and knowing you suffer..Is to know by just a thought of you that this is nothing compared to how you truly feel and how you are suffering. The poem itself is outstanding piece of work that while it lies incomplete is very inspiring and eye opening. It could to a point be soul restoring if we're speaking in the same contextual metaphors. I really loved this. I can't pull myself away from the emotion in here. Writings like this save...something I've always wanted to use my writings for. To save the same way, writing saves me. It's amazing just how much of the 'world' and the many realms and all of the other things I see are discovered to me in this....I see each metaphor and world that lies between every letter that makes a word, and every word that makes a sentence...and what I see.. is devastating but so awe inspiring. Brava on a brilliant right, bro
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awww i luv it it's so cute thats a very beautiful poem
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So far this sounds pretty good! ^-^
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