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Breakfast

I woke up this morning
to find you in my room
I didn't know it
that you were mine
I know you
you were in my dreams

You
me

I saw you that night
flash in the sky
Why do good things come
in a flash of light
I remember you used to say
sleep in my bed

You
me

We almost cried
We almost died
We almost spent every last drop of our lives
on a hope that could never realize
a tantalizing tapestry of lies
a fake display for our hoping eyes
we could never be
we should never hope
all we ask for is a chance to come home.

So go home.
So go home.

this came to me out of the blue, i have about half of it to a song on the piano.

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  • Sylver
    August 24
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    It ryhmes so nicely! :]