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Looks like life

Flour and sauce covered cheeks,
the kitchen in pieces,
the pizza burnt in the oven.

Water and soap soaked everything,
the hose spraying dirt,
the puppy in the house.

Coffee and sugar filled cups,
you on the floor,
me on your lap.

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  • Yemassee gold member
    September 30

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    When the moment is right, it is right and why not just drop everything to make the most of it? But yes, I think that is a great example of "having it had."