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The Ocean

The ocean soothes my tired mind.

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 14

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    aaaahhhhhhhhhhh that's why I always get so sleepy near the ocean..

    This one liner is perfect

  • abu nuwas
    September 16
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    Mine too -- only i call it sea!

  • Cindy
    September 14
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    Aye is sure does.

  • Warrior7
    August 30
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    Perfect one liner mate


  • wattle silver member
    August 25

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    One Ocean, one Queen; One liner -- Is good - Thank you.


  • individuality gold member
    August 24

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    a good sea splashing piece of poetry that helps the mind to relax whilst feet flipper smiles into ripples of existence that carry right across the ocean's wide laughter.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 23

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    excellent

    Great one liner
    It soothes my tired mind as well
    Best of luck in the contest
    Thank you for your entry
    Susan~~~

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