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Pain of Control

The more I focus on love the pain from her rejection becomes my prison
Fighting to find a way out but every way just seems to be treason

My soul shackled to hers like a filthy beast
My life completely in control of her brutish days
My body beaten and battered from the havoc of her ways

When people are near me I hide my pain with a smile
Like a hollow mask my true identity is forever hidden
The more gruesome the torture she puts me through
The deeper into the darkness my true identity fades

The tougher the challenge you are presented
The deeper the sign of the beast is embedded

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  • Wow dear, this is so powerful! I loved your choice of words. They still show so much sadness, I hope you'll find love soon.
    Nela

  • Wow...I am speechlees. this is a very powerful piece. So much emotion.


    • Dead Lover
      August 23
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      I am glad that you like it; I was really just speaking from the heart. This is really happening to me in real life.