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My Dear, You Have Won My Heart

My love,
Your soft lips upon mine send shivers down my spine
Breathing life into my frail body
Making my heart beat once more
Warm hands caressing my back
Releasing the tension that has been building up
Goosebumps erupting all over my body
Heat spreading through my cold skin
Warming me from the outside in

You were the one to show me what true love is
No pressure
No secrets
No lying
Just pure love

You are my shoulder to cry on
(Through death and despair)
My dancing partner
(When I just want to let loose)
My best friend I tell everything
(Including my dirty little secrets)
My giggling goofball
(Funny faces and silliness)
My therapist when I need to talk
(And so much cheaper)
My 'fix'
(You're better then any drug I've ever been on)

My Dear, you have won my heart
Taking a part of me no one has ever even touched
I've let you in, showed you the real me
And you still love me
With my flaws and insecurities
Scars and burns
Morning breath and bed head

Through God we found each other
We owe it to Him
Through sheer guts you stuck around
Knowing my past and my struggles
No matter the distance, I'm always with you
And you with me, holding a place in my heart

Thank you for all you've done
And all you continue to do
Words cannot describe how you make me feel
But I hope this can give you a little hint

I love you,
Heather

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LOVELYmurder
Option 2
Kinda cheesy but I love my boyfriend. He has helped me so much and I just can't express how much he means to me

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  • HereComesTheSun
    August 25

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    great dedication, really well done.

    i loved the part with a sentence and then a comment in () i thought it really added to the piece