Always remember, my feelings are true,
let me shower upon you, my love,
I want to build a life with you on our dreams,
what we share together, oh how beautiful,
never again, losing sight of you in my thoughts
let's begin to build together, new, from our memories.
Holding close, in our hearts, those memories,
remembering those feelings are true,
always sharing what is in our thoughts,
growing closer daily more and more in love,
no matter what life brings, what we share is beautiful,
holding on, building and living our dreams.
Will you allow me into your dreams,
as together we share the memories
and build together, something so beautiful,
promising forever my heart is true,
keeping unto you, I give my love,
cherishing all of you, in my thoughts.
Within my heart, mind, I carry these thoughts,
staying honest and true to our dreams,
this journey with you, it's so beautiful,
as now, we begin making new memories,
in a love that is forever true
you are my heart, my soul, my love
Wrapping around us, sacred and beautiful
the "forever" memories and thoughts
of two hearts sharing one soul forever true
sharing with each other, all our dreams
remembering lessons learned from past memories
always protecting and growing in love.
Staying forever true to our love
within a journey through life so beautiful
making and cherishing the new memories,
tucking them away into the thoughts,
and using them to build our dreams,
inside our love, forever true.
Cherishing the love, closely in our thoughts
inside this beautiful journey, sharing our dreams,
trusting our memories, staying in love forever true.
Author notes
Yep...... For Someone~
A Sestina 
new for me
A form poem where there is no syllable count, and does not need to rhyme,
the key is the rotation of the last word of each line......
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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This is totally beautifull..What a tribute..He will love it...I did..absolutely gorgeous.You are getting better and better..so good..
John
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i love this ...
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Beautiful sis, Wow, I wouldn't attenmpt anything like this. It was brilliant and beautiful.... And so dreamy.......
Love and
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well done. the form works well and captures the outpouring of loving emotions from the writer. good work.
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stunning and heArt felt beautiful love shown here
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This is absolutely beautiful and you should be very proud. Very few poets have attempted and completed a Sestina let alone a good one and this is amazingly wonderful!
Love,
Amera
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wow!
Such a great piece!!
i think you an awesome job here hon!!
I am working on rhyme at the school of poetry.. so far im doing ok.. passing every class so far..
but wow i am impressed with this!!
love to you, honey!!
Mandi
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Wow!
Oh my this was amazing. Such an incredible use of the form. you did great. Thank you for sharing.
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beautifulllllllllllllllllllll poem mommy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mommy is a amazing writer
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Thanks babygirl. but amazing well I will settle for good, or average
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