Now I sit in solitude
thinking about what I've done
Blood stains on my hands
from a wounded ego
Don't pretend I was the first to say
you weren't what you thought you were
I said it for your own good
But also for my own amusement
I'm here to break you down
to shatter the illusion that you matter
Author notes
I wrote this thinking about someone who hurt me so badly.
But then I thought, "Hmm, perhaps I hurt him in the worst way."
What was your favorite part? Your least favorite part?
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wicked!
I enjoyed this nasty but nice little poem -well written and I don't care what the reason/s were - I really liked the lines about blood stains and wounded ego, that was a great play on words.
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this was a great poem but you are missing the why, what did you do and why did you do it and why and what did you do to him that was worse??? anyways the best part is the rest line it has a very heavy impact on the poem. this was a really amazing poem, great read...much <3...scars.
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Thank you so very much for commenting.
You're right, there could have been more substance, but then again, I was rambling.
Again, thank you.
<3 <3 <3
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superb piece
the imagery in this poem is outstanding, the poem leads the reader along which is excellent, the poem is understandable - huge bonus for the reader, plenty thought and emotion used here. please keep writing poetry - imagine what talent would be dead to the world if you don't. pleasure to read friend. -
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Wow, thank you so much!
I really truly appreciate the comment.
=D
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