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I'm Sorry

Filled with lies and I don't know why
Feeling of hate to myself for doing what I do
I should have never done anything to you
You have never hurt me like I have hurt you
I am writing this today because I'm thinking of you
I am hating myself because I was untrue
But I'm thinking of  the day that I ask you to be mine for Ever and Eternity
So I just want you to know that I do love you And that I'M SORRY for ever putting you through any thing that I have
So from here on out I put in here for the world to see that I promise I will be honest to you FOREVER AND ALL ETERNITY.

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Written April 1st, 2004

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  • finding myself 84
    May 16, 2004
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    Absolutely beautiful and I think from the comment above she knew that you were sorry! This is so sweet seeing you writing poems for her! I love it! *Sonya*

  • Jenn Lynn
    April 1, 2004
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    I dont know what to say honestly....I know your sorry....but you did what you did, and it gets harder when I can't believe you when u tell me no after I've asked you if you are doing it again....and you know I hate not believing you....but its hard....I dont know, maybe someday...
    Love Always, ~*Jenn


  • ashwe91043
    April 1, 2004
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    this is absolutley beautiful i love the romance in this poem because you can feel the passion in this poem... like your heart is bleeding for forgiveness... it makes you want a better ending... like a happy one but once you get to the bottom it's like there is a lingering of hope.... this is awesome.... love it!