they sit asking;
"a crumb of society?"
or prosperity
on the doorsteps
of those
'armies of salvation'
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Author notes
Prompt: Cookies.
17 words
30 minutes
I didnt want to do a typical version of this prompt.
"Think of those who go without, when there is enough to go around."
A contest entry
- Sunday Morning Quickie...8 poets...20 minutes...17 words... by islekine.
460 points, ended August 23, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so true. There used to be a time when we looked out for one another. Thank you for this. God bless.
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Fantastic take on the prompt
Great work here -
Good job on the poem and your silver winnings. I liked the thought you put into this, very short but I liked it allot. I thought you wrote a great poem that was good on the prompt.
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I'd personally thump the gits from the Salvation Army in the ear-hole. Best wishes from the Tosser. Why not read some of my new poems? They have got even better since the last one you raved about.
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I love your thoughts for this! Great and creative work here. Good luck!
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Very Nice twist on his .. Good Luck in the contest
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i love your take on the prompt.
this is great. -
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thank you.
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Oh wow, I love your take on the prompt!
Its deep and thought-provoking
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thank youux
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Thanks so much!
If you know me, you know I like outside the norm...
Very creative take! Love it!
Best wishes always!
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Thanks.
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Excellent
Oh my a very creative take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
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Thank you! Best of luck to you too.
x
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