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Torrential Rain, Torrential Pain

The tears run down my face,
Theirs too much to embrace
Depression seems to grab me by the neck,
Then just leaves me on the cold ground in such a wreck.

Its becoming to hard to cope with this sadness & sorrow
To the point where I don't want to see another tommorrow.
The lights have gone out,
The black clouds are all about.

The rain begins to pour,
My mind feels like a war
Torrential rain,
Torrential pain.

The darkness swallows me whole,
Pain becomes to hard to control
I shiver alone in this darkness,
All my sorrows will just compress.

I'm sick of carrying this all around,
Everyday I feel more & more drowned
I dont know what to do anymore,
I just want to finish this war.

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  • hend shaheen
    August 31
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    sad.....but nice i like how the rhyme flows easily its not forced.....