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After My Death

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He was a man before his time;
he always had peace and love
on his mind. He tried to get the
world to see that without God
there really is no history.



He said there would come a time
when all the world would be of one kind.
He said to look in your face; we are
all members of one human race.



He asked the world to put down its
guns and make laws against shooting
anyone. He said love is what rules the
earth; you can see it in every child at
birth.



He said religion was a man-made thing
and it was the reason for war, heartaches
and pain. He said there is one God that
rules the world over every man,
woman, boy, and girl.



He said there will be one human race
in the end, we can have it now or wait
for yet another generation. We can live
together as one today or we can let
that chance again slip away.


My I Rest in peace,


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  • JadedSparrow
    September 15

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    Brilliant

    The simplistic truth woven throughout this poem made me read it a few times. The way this piece sounds read aloud only added to this work of art. Dear poet, you have a wonderful way with words. Dont ever stop writing.


  • Jesann gold member
    August 24

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    Excellent poem.
    Such simple truths...yet we all complicate it.!!
    Love the lines..
    "He said love is what rules the
    earth; you can see it in every child at
    birth."
    A wonderful write, well done.

    (He also said Satan rules the earth...deceiving all..but a time will come..when it all changes.)