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Crossing the bridge, looking for her




He crosses the footbridge
from station to concert hall.

              Drink another one...


Watch the low sun, lined up with the river;

                                     scabbed with loss.

Still hoping that this crossing
will be the meeting point
             with
the one who spelt her foreign name on his shirt
            last night
            in the bar
                                              just before  she left.

She said she would cycle round the world with him.


He needed time...a day...to respond.

Now he believes
that to her
the hesitation was critical.

He may not see her again to explain
   the stupidity
of the last times he was impetuous;
      crass
                                   rejected.

              So he crosses the footbridge
              aching with tiny hope
              looking at everyone
              looking for her.



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