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Quest

yet still I taste
missing pieces of me
.
.
.
in you


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  • Juno101
    August 29

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    i like, thought-provoking and creative. I mean I would've liked to see it longer instead of one good idea as a poem but I still enjoyed it. This would make a great ending to a poem, atleast I think so.

  • Galandria
    August 26
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    Just beautiful..9 little words to say it all....


  • Mari Goes gold member
    August 25
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    Most excellent Eddy! Just few words but great feel


  • nilav
    August 24
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    worth reading and thinking and feeling....


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 23

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    Succinct and sweet, Eddy.



  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 23

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    Wow Ed....you make us think....How we can get lost in one another, or someone dear to us that is gone Excellently penned!*rose8

  • sleepinglion
    August 23

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    Interesting poem Eddy, I like the idea, We are constantly seeing reflections of our selves in each other
    David

  • Blue Sky Woman
    August 23
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    WOW

    I couldn't have said it any better-so perfect

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