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A Simple Kiss

A simple kiss, awakes the passions
And a touch makes them want for more
It is love that is captured, softly she surrenders
Two hearts and souls together make them one

As the moon rises, the sun softly sets
there intensity grows, deepest desires now showed
Stretched across a blanket, in the sand
Juices flow, as the tide rolls in, our bodies quiver
Pleasures unleashed


With each time they kiss, a gentle embrace
Never wondering, but knowing
There soul mate, has been found
As hearts mend, so do souls
For it is an eternity, our love shall last!





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  • Bruce silver member
    November 19
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    It start with a kiss! Yes indeed it does! I loved this, in part because it echoes something I've been thinking about.

  • Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie